Introduction, Pt. 4 Pg. 3

Leona: AHHHHHHHH! *still not exactly oriented with the fact that she isn’t in Baron anymore, struggles with Ben and really kicks him hard* Let me go!

Ben: Neh… *winces and takes the blow*

Leona: *runs while she still has the chance to escape* Daddy! Cecil! Help! Help!

Ben: *lets out a long breath* I guess that’s a “yes”?

Leona: Golbez has gone evil again!

Posted by Aywren

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7 Comments on Introduction, Pt. 4 Pg. 3

Aywren sez:

One bit of clarity… Ben says “I guess that is a yes” to the fact that he asked Leona if she was okay on the previous page. I don’t like carrying over conversation from page to page like that because I get worried it will lose clarity… so just wanted to make this note.

Agla sez:

I’m not sure who to be sorry for… *sighs, smiles, then puts her left arm around Leona and her right around Ben*

Ben sez:

For me… you know you wanna be sorry for me. I’m the one that gets kicked! :{

Agla sez:

I don’t go a bundle on you getting kicked, but I also don’t like seeing the little lioness so scared and upset…AND I don’t like the idea that the thing she’s scared of is you, y’see, even if you weren’t quite Pack at that point. It’s depressing, seeing Packs break-I’m glad it doesn’t happen often. So I’ll just put it down to Random Stuff That Happens, and hug you both.

Aywren sez:

Well, this was back before Leona really knew Ben very well. I’d say it was more like she knew OF Ben… but probably never hung around him or really cared to associate with him.

Agla sez:

I thought as much.

frostfur sez:

I have a qustion. Why did Agla call Leona a loiness?