Ch56 Pg28
Feb11
on February 11, 2013
at 1:03 AM
-Meanwhile, outside the Cottage…-
*a rift opens, crackling of chaos*
Tai: *looks up and sees it*
*Zazowolfshadow appears in the light of the rift, then morphs down into personform-Zazo. She steps through, hair wild and flowing out to the sides.*
Wow. Nice entrance. O_O
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Nice entrance? Nice?!
My reaction would be: “AAAAAAH! Evil red glowing colour! Quick! Run away!”
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Yes. This. Very much, this.
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This would be the moment where I would have freaked out horribly, run into the woods, and lie in a fetal position while sobbing hysterically for several hours.
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Now we know what would have happened if the Wicked Witch -WAS- Toto
**gives Tai an Istari’s staff** Not a scythe, but very effective against wargs
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A speak-to-summon that happened so fast it makes one wonder if she doesn’t have some spell set to trigger a Red flag every time her name’s mentioned.
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Red Alert!
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I really like the fact that you went to colors. While this may have been nice in black and white, it looks awesome in colors. It helps portray the mood as well.
Tai, maybe you should start singing at her. A song about peacefulness, love and joy maybe? Or a really sad love song?
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Well that doesn’t seem ominous at all, especially with all that chaotic red and black. /endsarcasm
Her entrance is very dramatic. Well done!
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So next they call Cecil, he pulls a crystal out of nowhere and Zazo turns into a giant space-cockroach-wolf named Zazomus?
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