Location: BS Dimension, Baron
Ben: What happened? Why does it feel like Meteo? *points behind him*
Zeb: Because Meteo happened. *rubs his head*
Junior: Meteo. *pops up between them, flipping through his little Baronian Redshirt Guide* Like… the SPELL… Meteo? Is that what that was?
Ben: Who are you?
Zeb: *looks over at Ben* It doesn’t matter. It had the same effect it had on the last crystal master. *groans at his hurt shoulder*
Ben: What do you mean?
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Lots of commentary here:
http://aywren.tumblr.com/post/9237467443/wayrift-chapter-49-page-25-commentary-the-final
And looking for feedback. How do Ben’s white eyebrows look?
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Ben’s white eyebrows do not look bad at all. It actually makes him look better in my opinion.
*Also chuckles at Junior looking at the random Baronian Redshirt Guidebook*
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I like the white eye brows! It seems to match his softer personality!
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I like the eyebrows on Lord Benny-boy. Adds a lot of class me thinks.
And I just need to add: I called the hair! Ben! Zeb! Commence with the assault on Junior’s hair! My suggestion: yellow and purple with hot neon pink polka-dots! **Gives them the appropriate hair colors to accomplish the task**
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Hey! Don’t forget the plaid! I had to pay extra gil for it!
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Perhaps plaid skin? Magic could take care of that…**evil grin**
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Nehehe…~
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Casp: “As in.. absolutely no effect.”
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Junior, why you so cute? ^^
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Way to say “Yeah, I did drop a Meteo on Dad’s head.”
Makes the next “But it just revealed his true dragony form” part easier.
Also… eyebrows… Hmm. They do seem to work… but I’ll reserve judgment until we get an up close shot. What do you think of the Wren? That is what matters…
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Note to self: Read commentary, then post on page…
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No worries! I like them and it seems like most people have given a positive towards it. So, I’ll be keeping them for now. They aren’t too difficult to draw and I think it makes sense. I’ll have to see how they look on other figments such as Aiden, Zemi and Cecil.
Thanks to everyone for their thoughts!
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I like the white eyebrows, too
And hehe! Junior looks so tiny next to Ben and Zeb xD I love panel three.
Zeb’s great on this page, too. I wonder what he’s thinking exactly. He looks so depressed XD
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“How the heck am I supposed to tell my dimensional twin who treats my father as his own father that I summoned Meteo on Dad and that he attained his true dragon form without my dimensional twin attacking me?!”
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Not easily, but with all the grace that he truly has within (and which I think is showing a bit in this page).
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Um, Zeb? Ben? Do not discuss (Ya) family matters in front of Red shirt!
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Well, that look on Junior at last panel – does it mean, that in Baronian Redshirt Guide is mentioned, that there is only one known person who can cast Meteo?
Also it seems, that this particular spell left Zeb with terrible headache, on the top of other injuries.
Zeb probably wont be asking Aiden for non-white-magic-healing session, will he?
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Well maybe two if Rydia’s learned it in that realm.
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