Location: DS Dimension, Lunar Colony
*Warm sunny day in a thick, tropical environment with many small white dome-like structures, which serve as housing units, and the large shimmering crystal castle in the distance*
Leona: *steps out of the rift, playing with a bracelet* Are you sure this isn’t going to turn me into your unwilling zombie slave?
Ben: *sighs* No. But it will translate Lunar to Common, and your Common to Lunar, when it needs to. *drags Leona’s bag through the rift* Did you really have to bring all this?
New chapter! New commentary:
http://aywren.tumblr.com/post/13954634445/welcome-to-chapter-51-were-finally-done-with-the
Also, thanks to everyone who’s been voting! We’ve made it to the top 10 on the new voting page!
Give Luv:
0
Oh Ben. Its good for you! You need to bulk up a bit.
Give Luv:
1
GORGEOUS!!! Just-absolutely-GORGEOUS!!!
I rather like the “universal translator” bands…you both Trekkers too?
Can’t wait for the start of Book 2!
Give Luv:
1
Syn’s more of a Trekker than I am. But she drags me over to watch it from time to time.
Glad you like it! I’m not always so great with backgrounds, but I’m working on it. ^^;
Give Luv:
0
Forget the shiny on the previous page, I wanna go here instead!!!!!!!
By the way Ben, you need some help there buddy? Looks like you kind of need it…
Give Luv:
1
If you do go there, just watch out for all the giant snakes. *nods*
Give Luv:
0
I remember the giant snakes. Not venomous though, right?
Give Luv:
1
Giant snakes? Ooh yeah…I had forgotten about those! *goes and gets her snake catching gear* Hmm…I wonder if they make good pets. XD
Give Luv:
1
Also, completely random question but… Do we get to see DS Cecil in this chapter?
Give Luv:
1
No, no DSCecil. But we do get two new characters and one side character introduced.
Give Luv:
0
Sssssssssssssssssson of Kippppppppppppppppppppp?
Give Luv:
1
Pooooosssssibbbbllllyyyy!
Give Luv:
1
Oh? The ultimate weapon against Omega? XD
Give Luv:
1
yessssssss! ^^
Give Luv:
1
I foresee a Kip malfunction in the near future.
Give Luv:
1
So Ben ISN’T sure that it will turn her into his unwilling zombie slave?
Give Luv:
1
I know. Not the best use of English there. Ben’s first reaction was just an exasperated “No!” hehe
Give Luv:
1
*pats Ben*
I feel for ya. I do that more time that I can possibly count.
Give Luv:
1
Waaaait! “when it needs to”? That means not all the time? Did Ben add a censorship device to the bracelet? Wise man!
Give Luv:
4
lol, the general color scheme went strait from bluish-teal to strait out bright green/brown XD Leona’s colors match well with the scenery
I like the grassyness, its very…grassy
Give Luv:
1
It makes me kinda sad that I never finished my Lunarian design due to school, because I would have loved to see you draw her in the next few pages. xD
Give Luv:
1
Neh. Aywren, you should really include some warning sign to the site layout. Like “Beware, highly addictive” or “Be sure to time autoshutdown to your PC before entering”
I just wanted to find one picture for my project, and I spent here half a day! And it don’t look like I’m finished …
Give Luv:
1
Hahaha… sorry about that! It’s a good thing, I guess, meaning you enjoy reading through things? ^_^
Give Luv:
0
Well, yeah. I really enjoy reading through Wayrift. Only thing that keeps me off of it is that I know it nearly by heart – or I would, were it in my first language
Even though, time to time I’m cought to reread interesting parts again and again.
You’re really doing a great work here. It’s just – I’m not enough disciplined to stop reading good stuff. My bad.
It seems my christmas present for you guys wont be ready till Christmas, I’m afraid…
BTW, firstly I wasn’t really to the “full color” thing, but now I wish to see some older pages in color too
Give Luv:
1