-At the Damcyan Zoo-
Edward: *stares through the bars* So this is the dragon who held defense at our wall.
Zemi: *sad, saggy look*
-At the Damcyan Zoo-
Edward: *stares through the bars* So this is the dragon who held defense at our wall.
Zemi: *sad, saggy look*
Aww…. *huggles the poor Zemi* Don’t worry, I’m sure someone will go and spike that mean Zazo’s kibble to get back at her for you!
*urber-huggles* awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! He so sad! =(
Zemi definitely needs a hug..and maybe a poptart.
He looks quite destraught.
The frowny face made me giggle a bit, though.
Zemi’s emoticons always make me giggle
Poor poor Zemi… hopefully they’ll let him out of the zoo soon at the very least… *hugs Zemi and leaves a box of poptarts for him*
Poor Zemi.
I love his little ponytail, though.
Awww. *huggles Zemi*
Wait, why didn’t he go Chibi on them and slip through the bars?
Remember, he just got pretty beat up and soaked by Zazo. So I think he’s fairly drained out and hasn’t had a chance to recharge (needs sunlight).
Oh… plus… he gets a little down when humans throw him in jail. He still doesn’t understand why they don’t luv him! XD
We luv him!
AAAAWWWSSSSSS -fangirly scream- SO KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII poor lil zemi did the big bad wolf huwt yous? feelz betterz Zemi-chan! -places poptarts and a BIG bowl of piping hot ramen next to him-
*shifty eyes*
…
*yoinks some ramen*
Just read the new Dreigiau’s (there are 2), and they were so sad!! But well writen, appart from the occasional wrong word or added word or misspelling.
That sounded mean, and I appoligise for that and my horrible spelling.
Aw well, fixed a few typos. Can’t always catch them all, even after a proofreading!
Silver is in the mood to sugest that you get someone to read over it before you post it, to catch at least most of what you didn’t.
Sensible sugestion?
Every chapter I post is ALWAYS read over by one other person before it is posted. I proofread it at least three times before I post it, as well. Sometimes things still slip up — I don’t see that missing one letter on one word is the end of the world, to be honest. And after they’re posted, folks like Al do a good job of alerting me to little mistakes which I fix on the spot.
I was in a particular rush to get these pieces up yesterday morning as they were already a day late. And I will be doing my best over the next two weeks to proof, code and draw for the next 8-or-so chapters until Dreigiau is finally complete. That’s a rigorous update schedule for me, so one can’t always expect perfection.
but from a readers perspective, it’s funny when the editors and everyone else misses some little detail. In my favorite book series, Wheel of Time, my brother pointed out that all the male ‘magic’ users were using the female version of that worlds ‘magic’ for a few chapters. The names of the ‘magics’ were a few letters off, and I hadn’t known till he pointed it out to me last week.
For those of you not familiar with the series, the word magic is in quote marks, because in that world, it’s not magic, it’s something more complicated, and they ‘channel’.
I applaud Zemi for showing enough self control to not lean on the bars and pop them out onto Edward.
Edward should let him out. He hasn’t been dangerous (to them) and putting an esteemed warrior in a cage isn’t nice.
Has he even woken up fully yet, though?