Guards: Come quietly, now. *takes Ben away*
Ben: *miserable face, carries Leona*
BSC: I could have sworn… *looks around the crystal platform*
Edward: *looks down at Zeb* Do you think it’s really Golbez?
BSC: Probably another copycat. *quiet*
Zeb: *starts to get up* Wai…
BSC: >: O *swings around his arm and knocks Zeb straight out with the pommel of the sword*
*gigglesnort* Oh this was so worth paying the 2.99 for internet service at my hotel. Ben holding Leona and looking so sad, total “Awww” moment! And Chibi BSC and Chibi Zeb! Woo!
That’s a good deal — most hotels I’ve been to charge $10 or more!
You would think the helmet would have protected Zeb’s thick skull against the Ye Olde Clobbering. >.>
That is no ordinary clobbering! That’s a level 99 Paladin clobber! XD
I would think that the helmet would make the blow worse, with the ringing, and the metal possibly being bent onto his head…
Ah. So now it is all up to Zemi. Well and Tai… Can’t wait to see how they get out of this.
I bet there are some people who wish Golbez was that easy to KO in the game! Bonk! Like in the three stooges. Well… wham is a pretty good sound effect too!
Ben and Leona in panel one are absolutely amazing. Far too good there! So precious! Aww. It also demonstrates that, yes, Ben is freaking huge!
On another note, panel three Golbez shadow (or armour itself) has a spike on the shoulder plate that passes over Edward’s cloak (panel’s right) and you can see the line of the cloak. Anyway I mention it because there is a place where one of the helmet spikes do the same thing on the other side of Edward and there is no such line there (panel’s left). This could all be a difference with angle though, I have no idea how whatever program being used works. I am basically stuck to ms paint in terms of my own personal experience. I am curious if this was on purpose, it just caught my eye.
And 15, 635 words so far! Go Wren! (And I mean, it’s still November 3rd for me, 3 days over 15000 words? That’s amazing!)
Granted Edward had already pummeled Zeb with his music. But still, I can’t imagine that is worse than Meteo.
I wonder how many men it will take to haul Zeb away. XD He’s huge too, and he won’t be walking.
Thank you! That’s partially because I took two days off from work to get a writing blitz done. I’ll slow down from here on though, most likely.
2 things. Poor zeb, and leona looks tiny!! comparativly…. Good page though!!
Ben looks so sad! The first thing I noticed was that Leona looks really small! And then I was wondering how Ben managed to scoop her up with the magelocks.
Zeb’s face is great in panel 4. For a pair of eyes he can be really expressive. Although I’m not sure what he could have said at that point to help himself. “no wait! I AM the real Golbez!” That’ll get them to let him go for sure…
I wonder what Aiden is thinking. “He just bashed my son in the head, with ME!”
hmmm…
Zazo and Drake have Zemi and Tai pinned, Cecil and Edward have locked up Ben, Leona, KluYa, and Zeb, That means they’re only hopes are Kip and Kory. Snerk, they’re all doomed. XD
Whatever happened to Junior anyway?
its the best way to shut zed up knock him on the head id say 10 points to BSC but i dont keep score:P
realy good page and a unexpeckted end to the big fight (well not as BIG as zemi and zazo but nothing can top THAT fight)
stupid BSC: first off dont magelok your brother from another dimension and second off you dont hit your brother (from this dimension) over the head with your father!