Ben: It’s just… I thought it was over. And just… *covers his face* You remind me of her sometimes.
Leona: o_O; But she was a Moonar, right?
Ben: Yeah. Joran… *pauses as if he rarely says her name* Joran was a friend of my father’s, I think. Originally. But when he didn’t come back from the Blue Planet, she found out I was his son, and she tracked me down. Once she found my room, that was it. She’d sneak her way in whenever she wanted to. Just to visit… sorta like you do. I kept to myself most the time and she was probably the only Lunar friend I had. But she’d never let me stay alone for too long. Eventually, I just accepted it. And sometimes even taught her some magic.













Okay… NOW we get to see a sincerely sad Ben.
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Owch, my heart. I feel like crying now. TT~TT
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Awwww *grabs the a huge box of tissues*
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Geez. Now I feel like crying. Nice job, Wren. Verily touching (though slightly annoying to nearly short-circuit my keyboard with tears).
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D’aaawww!
*huggles Ben*
*glomps Joran*
4th panel Joran kind of reminds me of Ty Lee from Avatar…as far as the smile and pose go. That’s really the only Ty Lee resemblance though.
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Nuuuue, sad Ben! *Glompsicle*
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aws~ T-T poor poor poor benny boy!!!! i wanna hug him! -glomps ben-!!!
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FINALLY! Ben has needed to purge more of his background for AGES! Yeah!!! Maybe he should do some cathartic screaming. It would at least purge his latent existential angst! *aaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
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I just have to say it again. I love the expressions!
You did well with Ben’s sad face in the last panel. You can really see that his sadness is very much real.
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Thanks everyone!
Drawing Ben this sad pulls at my heartstrings. I hope you folks don’t mind if he vents just a little bit. I try to keep things from being angsty (angsty Ben is a scary thought!), but there are a lot of unspoken issues that Ben could really use getting off his chest.
I’m rusty at drawing poor Joran. I really haven’t drawn her that often considering how long her character has been around. ^^;
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i love the second to last panel, it’s so cute, and Ben’s expression is so similar to the one he make’s when leona breaks in, it made me laugh out loud, and i think my brother thinks i’m insane now:p (took him long enough to figure it out >.<)
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He’s gonna cry isn’t he? Isn’t he?
;__; The way you drew his expressions are so moving…
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Aww, poor Ben
Yes, yes, get it all off now so that maybe he won’t have to be sad very much any more
Also so he can be normal. Having to carry all that stuff can’t be aaaaaaaany fun. Panel four made me laugh, too XD also when Leona said “Moonar.”
I do need to point out something: In the last panel, there’s a word missing, I think. It says, “I kept to myself most the time,” but I think it’s supposed to say, “I kept to myself most OF the time.”
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Stormcloud: Actually, were I to speak that sentence aloud, I’d have left off the word “of,” too. I don’t think it’s technically wrong either way you say it. But maybe that’s just me!
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Oh! Well, I sort of guessed that MIGHT be it, but I wasn’t sure, because ‘I’ would never leave ‘of’ out. I’m too particular, I guess. I figured I’d point it out just in case. Glad it’s not actually a problem ^.^
Incidentally, I heard somewhere that the word ‘of’ isn’t processed well by the brain or something. I thought that was really weird until I tested myself, and found it was true. XD
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You do some really good facial expressions – he looks so sad in the last frame :’(
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