Ch21 Pg16

KY: *sad look* It wasn’t about being grown up!
Zeb: Yesss.. it is… u always.. said.. I wazzn’t ma-ture enuf…
Kory: KluYa.. *grumbles* from all your experience, haven’t you learned that it’s useless arguing with a drunk man?
Ben: Who’s drunk? *hiccups and covers his mouth* Ermph!
KY: …
Kory: Let’s just get them home… back through the rift. Where they can’t get themselves hurt or hurt anyone else?
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5 Comments on Ch21 Pg16
tali-demonic sez:
hehe poor kluya… and poor ben as well
Raven sez:
One of the things I love most about this comic is how imperfect the characters are, how realisticly flawed. And how even the most apparently evil get a chance.
It’s also incredible how naturally you give each one the opportunity to be understood - none of the cliche dramatic monologuing.
And the chibis. Always the chibis ^^
KJ sez:
Don’t drink and squish, kids.
It’s amusing and kind of sad how Zeb, in his drunken state, is acting like the child he was. Chibi sick Ben makes my day. ^_^
Arstein sez:
Poor Aiden… I know what he’s going through… Well, in rp on a forum, one of my daughters there gets flirty when drunk… Not fun for fatherly overprotection insticts…
Aywren sez:
Raven: Thank you so much for your comment! We really do try to do just as you describe there — each of our characters are developed to be as “human” as we can get them (sometimes a little too human in my case!). This is always an ongoing process… but I’m glad that people can pick up on this even in the silliest of storylines!