Ch13 Pg10

*above KY, the silhouette of Zeromus begins to form from the dark void and the fateful words are said… * I will not perish.. so long as evil… dwells in the hearts.. of men….

Ben: *freezes, face chilled in absolute terror…. then pulls himself together long enough… to reach for KY one last time*

KY: *pulls forward, image no longer much of KY — rather something looking like the outline of a man.. scrabbles forward in desperation.. giving a last lunge… *

Posted by Aywren

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5 Comments on Ch13 Pg10

Subaru sez:

I… I didn’t think that I would hear that Zeroms’s words in this scene…
I don’t know why I cry now (really!)… Because I’m scared? I’m sad… to see the curse?
I feel something… like my heart is splitted.

Aywren sez:

Don’t cry Subaru! *hugs* I didn’t know this page had that much impact! :o Words of Zeromus are always evil.

Agla sez:

Falling down a hole. One ya didn’t know was there. Falling down a hole. Or being ambushed. Or walking up to the shiny-crystal and reaching out your hand to take it but suddenly a demonfiend leaping out of it at you…

Aywren sez:

Well, KluYa did try to warn Ben it wouldn’t be easy?

Doveriandragoon sez:

There’s just something that the image of Zeromus, no mater how blurred, does to me. It’s like a chill that vibrates the deepest parts of my soul. That his theme immediately began playing in my mind did little to ease that feeling. Impressive. Nice work with the font for his words, too.

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