Ch10 Pg19

Leona: *steps through the rift with her eyes closed and smacks right into Ben’s back*

Ben: Ermph..! *looks at Leona* ~Why am I letting her push me around…?~ *sighs a little* …

Posted by Aywren

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5 Comments on Ch10 Pg19

Kishi-Keahi sez:

-sighs- “amusement” huh? sorry i havnt commented in a while (not that any 1 would notice) but i was gone for a month and back tracked to catch up (i know i went back quite a ways but…it was that good to want to re-read it)

Aywren sez:

I’m not 100% happy with the flow of action on this page between frame one and frame two — I don’t think it got across that Leona walked through the rift and then bumped into Ben. :/

KJ sez:

We understood! *patpat* It’s okay… The faces and poses came out really well here. ^_^ Was Ben’s little comment supposed to be literal? (since Leona did just physically push him)

Agla sez:

It could be both!

Aywren sez:

Actually, it played out as a pun on the page. Don’t think it was originally written to be like that, though. But I’ll take my amusement where I get it. XD

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