Ch1 Pg10

Ben: *too late — falls straight to his knees, head bowed, absolutely frozen in fear* ~O-Odin’s Blade!~
Leona: Ahhh! *she pulls on his cloak* Ben! Come on! Get up! He’s just a little shrimpy guy!
Ben: *not budging an inch*
KY: Benjamin… Please get up?
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9 Comments on Ch1 Pg10
Iamthatis sez:
Ben… oh, Ben… *cough* sorry, I just- feel so much for him… Anyway, great page, Wren! (And KJ!!) I expecially like Aiden in this one.
KJ sez:
BEN’S HAIR SO PRETTYYYY!!!! *cough* Erm… yeah.
Aywren sez:
Ben’s hair was hard to draw in this one.. glad you think it came out okay! And I actually really like Aiden through out this whole section — he does a lot to take care of Ben even though Ben’s not technically REALLY his son. But this is where it started for the two of them.
Iamthatis sez:
…You know what would be wierd? If the other KluYa got jealous.
Aywren sez:
Nah… MKY would actually be happy to know that someone is taking care of his sons in his stead.
Pen sez:
Wow…just…wow.
Aywren sez:
Wow? Is that a good wow or a bad wow?
Pen sez:
Good wow, very good wow. I’m completely blown away by the first panel– The Golbez’s facial expression, his body posture, the way his hair moves…it’s just very, wow, expressive feels like a cheap word to compare what it’s like, but that’s essential what it is. *two thumbs up for Wren*
Aywren sez:
Glad it was a good “wow”, Pen. I wondered if it was more of a “Wow — Ben really overreacted there” sorta thing. Which, for Ben… he didn’t. But it might seem that way if you don’t take into consideration how highly he views KluYa.